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Alternate Ending

SPOILER ALERT – Only read this if you have finished the book already!

Here’s an experimental alternate ending. For everyone who just wants a quick and happy ending and who doesn’t care to read a second part.(This is not the ending I personally find realistic, though, and not what part 2 is going to be based on. I still like my orignal ending…)
The following starts in Chapter “Back Off” when D walks out of the house after her exchange with Liz. See what you think.

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Not quite finished yet…

I am about 2/3 done with the second part. Will let my test readers have a first look soon, just to make sure the story works.
The book will probably be called CAN YOU MEND  IT? Torn and sets in one day after the last scene of Part 1.  Apart from Deens it’ll take us to London, Amsterdam and Florence…
Hoping  to release a Sneak Preview on a few scenes and the Planned Chapter overview of at least the first 2/3 soon.

 

The scene it all started with…

This book developed around a scene that I have had in my head for maybe twenty years and decided to put into a story only two years ago.
The scene it all started with is the one where Joe brings D the phone she had dropped in his car and he finds her listening to the CD he made her.
When I first started writing this down I realized how hard it is to find the right words to get the feeling across.  The first steps were really hard and the first drafts just horrible…